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Shirley Silva's avatar

Going Dark...(a relationship constrained by 4 sentences and 4 seasons)

1. It was easing into sunshine when we met at that Starbucks, at that table, at that time...finally warm enough to sit outside.

2. By the time the air turned blue and hot, we were in love and there was not a cloud in the sky.

3. When the wind danced along the ground, sweeping dust and dry, leafy partners, there was something else going on...something I couldn't put my finger on.

4. Then it got darker; the sun sank earlier, slipped deeper, weighed heavier and so did I.

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Kristen Holt-Browning's avatar

I love writing poems with/against constraints, and I actually have a hard time writing without one! I need some kind of structure, however slight, to guide and assist me. One of my favorite constraints is to pick a random line from a book of poetry (just grab the closest one!), and use that as a first line or title for my own poem. If that doesn't feel like enough to work with, I also force myself to use one word in that chosen line in each line of my own poem.

I also highly recommend the Golden Shovel form! If you google it, lots of examples and explanations come up.

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