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May 10, 2023Liked by Alison Acheson

Love this…knowing when to let a piece ‘go’…like painting…some of them you could work on forever. I do love the challenge of rewriting-going deeper, into the forest, hoping to come out cleaner and fresher. :)

Also like how writing a piece can be a learning and nothing more - just for the exercise.

Writing for pleasure? I write more out of need…but there is pleasure when something works out the way I want. Pleasure is my reward. 😊

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For me, there is a difference between writing the first draft and subsequent revisions. The first draft feels the most like "writing" to me. That said, I spend one-third of my time on a book writing the first draft and two-thirds revising it. The revision process is, in some ways, kind of peaceful -- until you reach the last two or three revisions, where it then can become tedious, to say the least.

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May 10, 2023·edited Jun 8, 2023Liked by Alison Acheson

When I write fiction and poetry it is purely for pleasure. Both forms allow me to write in an unfiltered way, as I am in the cinema of my mind. I do go back and laboriously add the required scenic details that other readers need. I've recently switched to allowing dialogue free rein. It's less frustrating for sketching in a scene and recognizing the beats. For me writing blogs are like piano practice. Essential to remaining strong yet limber.

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May 11, 2023Liked by Alison Acheson

A work of art is never finished, merely abandoned... Not sure who said that but this is what came to mind reading your great post, Alison. I find it hard to know when to stop re-writing and move on. It's usually when I start second guessing everything: The Title, the start, the end, the characters...everything. And I fear I'm f..king up as many things as I fix. That's when you really need someone outside of you to give you notes and some objective perspective. I give those I trust permission to say: STOP! THAT'S ENOUGH. YOUR WORK IS DONE HERE! (or at least as done as you'll ever be able to do...given your talents/limits). I am bad a falling in love with the new idea...and falling out of love with what drew me to write something in the first place. That's also a good time to move on. All that said - it's a good day if I'm re-writing one thing and also writing a new thing. The End remembers the Beginning :) Yes, great advice. It's what https://savethecat.com/ by Blake Snyder talks about. The opening image of a film / play / story should mirror the final image somehow. If the opening is of ISOLATION - someone alone on a beach, maybe the final image is one of COMMUNITY - the same person celebrating with friends/family/found family on a beach. cheers DG

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