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Picturebook Submission #16

Re-visioning of Bridget and Lambie

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Alison Acheson
Nov 24, 2022
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Bridget and Lambie - re-write

by Sheryl McFarlane

*Alison’s note: there’s so much to be gleaned from another writer’s process, especially in re-writing/re-visioning. Check out the original, with the feedback offered, and now Sheryl’s re-write. I’m so happy to see this re-posting!

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Bridget slides down the slide,

swings on …

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