Picturebook Sub #12

Polkadots and Plaid - by Cindy Heinrichs

Photo by frank mckenna on Unsplash

Note: from Cindy

This story is a bit long, I know. I’m at the stage where I’m trying to work out certain logistics, but also to decide what can go. Right now I’m clinging a bit to my babies, so feedback would be most welcome. 

I decided to submit this story at this point because of Alison’s piece about dialogue tags. I se…