A Child is Born - "holiday writing" mini-course submission #1

Let the thinking and discussion begin!

So this is our first mini-course “holiday writing” submission!

Please use the “comments” for posting your feedback: useful thoughts/observations, working with the “grain” of the story—the writer’s intentions.

Do ask questions, if you feel a need to have something clarified.

Also, as discussed in the initial post about the mini-course, if the writer wants …